How to join the sentences together coherently?
I need to list some data but I can't use a list. For example, (a) "The revenue of A amounted to XXX." (b) "The reveneue of B amounted to XXX", (c) "The revenue of C amounted to XXX."

So the first question is, can I omit the verb and write "The revenue of A amounted to XXX, that of B XXX, that of C XXX."?
The second question is, if (a) and (b) do not form a contrast or contrast, can I use "while" to join them together?do not form a contrast or comparison

Question

How to join the sentences together coherently?
I need to list some data but I can't use a list. For example, (a) "The revenue of A amounted to XXX." (b) "The reveneue of B amounted to XXX", (c) "The revenue of C amounted to XXX." 

So the first question is, can I omit the verb and write "The revenue of A amounted to XXX, that of B XXX, that of C XXX."?
The second question is, if (a) and (b) do not form a contrast or contrast, can I use "while" to join them together?do not form a contrast or comparison

Answer

Is this an exercise? Was the 'do not contrast' an instruction for the exercise?

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