Does this sentence make sense?
The pleasure of having a true friend in a sly world is like drinking hot coffee in the snow. Nevertheless it doesn’t make the weather warm, it can make you warm-hearted.

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Choose a better synonym for "sly".

Replace "nevertheless" with "even though".

The rest is just fine. :)

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It is best just to say, "It is wonderfully heart-warming to know that one has a true friend."

Clumsy manoeuvres with mixed metaphors undermine your efforts and expose all your inadequacies.

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However, it is a really nice saying!

Best,

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