도와주세요: My introduction in Korean (Please correct or improve)
안녕하세요 저는 카라입니다, 저는 열일곱살입니다, 저는 뉴질랜드에 사라요, 고등학생입니다 그리고 내년 대학에 갈가에요.

Hello, I'm Kara I'm seventeen year old. I live in New Zealand, I attend high school and I am going to to university next year.

I've tried to translate sentence by sentence but I'm not sure how to join them. Should I be using " 그리고" ?? Then i didn't want to use " 그리고" to much like i use '"저는" and "입니다 " excessively.

감사합니다.

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도와주세요: My introduction in Korean (Please correct or improve)
안녕하세요 저는 카라입니다, 저는 열일곱살입니다, 저는 뉴질랜드에 사라요, 고등학생입니다 그리고 내년 대학에 갈가에요.

Hello, I'm Kara I'm seventeen year old. I live in New Zealand, I attend high school and I am going to to university next year.

I've tried to translate sentence by sentence but I'm not sure how to join them. Should I be using " 그리고" ?? Then i didn't want to use " 그리고" to much like i use '"저는" and "입니다 " excessively.

감사합니다.

Answer

Here is a short one,
"안녕하세요, 저는 올해 17살, 고생학생이고 뉴질랜드에 사는 카라입니다. 내년에 대학에 가요."

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