i really want to know whether there is some grammer mistakes in those sentence or not
since no one can keep me company romantically,words from my heart,sincerely,then there is no better way to make some money,perhaps a large amount of ,during the seven days' holiday,Zhi Xing ,my lucky city,a beautiful place ,i am coming

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i really want to know whether  there is some grammer mistakes in those sentence or not
since  no one can keep me company romantically,words from my heart,sincerely,then there is no better way to make some money,perhaps a large amount of ,during the seven days' holiday,Zhi Xing ,my lucky city,a beautiful place ,i am coming

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Try this one.

SInce no one can romantically make me company, and those are sincere words from my heart, how about making some money? Perhaps a large amount of it during the seven-day-vacation. Zhi Xing, my lucky city,a beautiful place ,I am coming.

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I agree with Jeff. There is not one thing right about your English.
1. Capital letters.
2. Spaces between words
3. Full stops
4. Plenty of other things I never saw before.
I don't mind correcting your sentences, but first of all you need to write actual sentences.

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Yes, plenty including your title, your English mechanics, grammar...

I really wanted to know if there are grammar mistakes in these sentences.

Since no one wants me romantically, then my since heartfelt words are to make money, lots of it during this seven holidays.  Here I come, my Zhi Xing, my lucky city.

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