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The Importance of English
English is the main language in use today around the world. Every day, the number of companies that conduct their business in English increases. In the Internet age, we need a common language that helps us to communicate.
While it is very important to cherish and maintain our own languages and cultures, it is even more important that we have a common tool that allows us to break down barriers. The world moves quickly. In the near future, and in spite of our differences, we will all need and depend on each other even more; therefore, I think the English language will serve as that fundamental connection of our union.
Hi, . Good job! The changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to complete your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope this helps you. J.
The word “everyday” means a common event, but “every day” means each single day, which is the one that you meant here (i.e. Donald Trump telling a lie is an everyday event, one that sadly happens every day). To allow for subject-verb agreement, if you use “number,” you need to use “increases.” (Conversely, if you had used “numbers,” you would then use “increase.” You did this a number of times in your post…) Finally, the meaning of the words "nexus" and "union" overlap to a great extent, so IMHO, using both in the same sentence is somewhat redundant...(but changing one of them to a synonym as I did above works much better, no?).
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