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Enjoyment This is the ninth day that I went to bed early. Recently, I am trying to change my rituals having a negative effect on my life and study. An attempt is to enjoy. Seldom did I really pay much attention to the colorful things existing ,and as a result , I missed a number of wonderful things. But now I am changing. For instance, fragrant flowers can draw my attention , the chirps of birds provide me with music and the murmuring stream makes me feel peaceful. So, let's enjoy every moment that deserves our enjoyment. Be grateful to everyone. Good night.

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Enjoyment

This is the ninth day that I went am going to bed early.

Recently, I am trying to change my the rituals that are having a negative effect on my life and study. An One (<--在这句子里,"one" 比 "an" 更强。) attempt is to enjoy my surroundings more. Seldom did I really pay much attention to the colorful things existing items around me, and as a result, I missed a number of wonderful things objects. (<--"Things" 这个词最好避开用。在正式英文里,"things" 非常难听。) But However, (<--英文句子最好不要用连词开始。) now I am changing. For instance, fragrant flowers can draw my attention, the chirps of birds provide me with music, and the murmuring stream makes me feel peaceful.
So, Let's enjoy every moment that deserves our enjoyment.
Be grateful to everyone.
Good night.

继续加油练习,Regina! =)

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