Could you correct it please?
Dear Mary,
Thank you for letter. I'm sorry I haven't written so long.
What a pity that your parents don't have time to speak or listen to you. I think you should tell them what you need their kindness and care.
I love my family because my parents really love me and they always help me in my hour of need. My parents have time to listen to me and I have time to listen to them too. To solve some problem with my parents I usually just talk to them.
And what about you? How you solve problems with your parents?
That's all for now. I must go. Write soon.
Yours,
Egor
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Could you correct it please?
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your letter. I'm sorry that I haven't written in so long.
What a pity that your parents don't have the time to speak or listen to you. I think you should tell them that you need their kindness and care.
I love my family because my parents really love me and they always help me in my hour of need. My parents have the time to listen to me and I have the time to listen to them too. To solve any problem with my parents I usually just talk to them.
What about you? How do you solve your problems with your parents?
That's all for now. I have to go. Write soon.
Yours,
Egor
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Could you correct it please?
Dear Mary,Thank you for your letter. I'm sorry I haven't written for so long.
What a pity that your parents don't have time to speak or listen to you. I think you should tell them what that you need their kindness and care.
I love my family because my parents really love me and they always help me in my hour of need. My parents have the time to listen to me and I always have time to listen to them too. To solve some problem with my parents I usually just talk to them.
And what about you? How do you solve problems with your parents?
That's all for now. I must go. Write soon.
Yours,
Egor
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