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I'm tired... Using italki is difficult for me. Everything is new to me, and especieally, it's hard to upload my photos!! why can not??? By the way, I took the exam at college. It was difficult for me. And then I ate lunch with my friend. We enjoyed Print Club(Most Japanese people say Purikura). Print Club is kind of the camera machine and Japanese teenagers really like it. I changed color of hair and cut my forelock, so when I saw the pictures, I looked more younger than before. But my friends said "You became more pretty!" , so I was happy. =)

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I'm tired...

Using italki is difficult for me.
Everything is new to me, and 1) most of all especieally, it's hard to upload my photos!!
why 2) can't I not???
By the way, I took 3) an the exam at college.
It was difficult for me.
And then I ate lunch with my friend. We enjoyed Print Club(Most Japanese people say Purikura). Print Club is 4) a kind of the camera machine, and Japanese teenagers really like it.
I changed color of hair and cut my 5) bangs forelock, so when I saw the pictures, I looked more younger than before.
But my friends said "You became more pretty!" , so I was happy. =)

1) 初めとして、especieallyではなくてespeciallyです。 でもこの文脈ではmost of all(何よりも)の方が適切かもしれません。 韻律のためにも、と思います。 especiallyの使い方についてなんですが、普通は副詞として使われるのです。 例えば:

That kappa over there-- the one sitting under the palm tree-- is especially fat.

そっちの河童、その椰子の木の下に座ってるやつはね、特に太ってる。

3) ひろみさんの言った試験が読者に知られない試験で、一定の試験ではありません。 従って定冠詞のtheではなくて不定冠詞のanでいいです。

5) forelockという言葉はあんまり使われませんね。 ちょっと古代らしく聞こえます。 

I'm sure you'll get re-aquainted to Italki soon.  ^__^.

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haha Purikura, now I know what it is. Do guys do it too? Or only girls? By the way! I can read your name on the picture right now! Yes man! But you told me that it's wrong to write names in Kana :) What subject was that exam on? English?
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hi:) oh it's oki 'cos i'm glad to know u:P then let's talk on skype or somethin' if u have them. it's easy to contuct me:P thanks:) but i have to change my color of hair soon though:P
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Hi! I'm new as well! I don't understand this site at all...All i wanna do is learn japanese!!! :( LOL!! It said that you were one of the free somethings...(>O<) I was hoping i could contact you some-how! by the way my name is lauren! :) (I'm very sorry to invade you beautiful blog...i just wanted to say hi or something) Your hair is very pretty! :)
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Thanks, アナスタシーヤ :) i was glad to hear that!

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