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I'm tired...
Using italki is difficult for me.
Everything is new to me, and 1) most of all especieally, it's hard to upload my photos!!
why 2) can't I not???
By the way, I took 3) an the exam at college.
It was difficult for me.
And then I ate lunch with my friend. We enjoyed Print Club(Most Japanese people say Purikura). Print Club is 4) a kind of the camera machine, and Japanese teenagers really like it.
I changed color of hair and cut my 5) bangs forelock, so when I saw the pictures, I looked more younger than before.
But my friends said "You became more pretty!" , so I was happy. =)
1) 初めとして、especieallyではなくてespeciallyです。 でもこの文脈ではmost of all(何よりも)の方が適切かもしれません。 韻律のためにも、と思います。 especiallyの使い方についてなんですが、普通は副詞として使われるのです。 例えば:
That kappa over there-- the one sitting under the palm tree-- is especially fat.
そっちの河童、その椰子の木の下に座ってるやつはね、特に太ってる。
3) ひろみさんの言った試験が読者に知られない試験で、一定の試験ではありません。 従って定冠詞のtheではなくて不定冠詞のanでいいです。
5) forelockという言葉はあんまり使われませんね。 ちょっと古代らしく聞こえます。
I'm sure you'll get re-aquainted to Italki soon. ^__^.
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