About Mother's Day.
It was
Mother's
Day yesterday
.I gave cosmetics to my mother instead of flowers.
She likes cosmetics!
I used to give flowers to my mother, but it's changed this year.
She looked like she was happy!
And, I became happy too.
Basically ,we give a flowers to our mothers on Mother's Day in Japan.
It's kind of traditional
What do you do in your countries?
What I would have written is below:
It was Mother's Day yesterday; I gave cosmetics to my mother instead of flowers. She likes cosmetics a lot. I used to give flowers to my mother, but it's changed this year. She looked happy to receive them; I became happy too.
It's a tradition to give our mothers flowers on Mother's Day in Japan. What do you do in your countries?
The way you have set up your sentences makes it look like you are writing a poem. If you are writing normally, we prefer to write in paragraphs, with no lines in between our sentences - unless we are starting a new paragraph.
I hope this helped. Let me know if you have any other questions!
Cheers :)