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The Evolution Of The Toilet It was in the 20th century that western-style toilets were introduced into Japan. The Japanese are good at improving things. We felt uncomfortable when we sat on a cold toilet seat in winter. So we started to use toilet seat cover made of towel fabric. Now the seat itself is warm with the built-in heater. In 1980, a toilet manufacturer released a new product named "Washlet" whch has a built-in shower in a toilet bowl with the attention-grabbing copy of "The bottom wants to be washed." It has been getting more and more popular and they say 50% of the whole households have it at present. I heard some tourists from other countries said that they were too afraid to touch the buttons. In a latest toilet cubicle, you will see a hook to hang your bag, disinfectant to sterize the toilet seat, fake flushing sound machine to maffle the actual sound, a baby chair to hold your baby, toilet training seat and the most recent addition of a cane holder for the elderly.

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The Evolution Of The Toilet

It was in the 20th century that western-style toilets were introduced into Japan. The Japanese are good at improving things. We felt uncomfortable when we sat on a cold toilet seat in winter. So we started to use toilet seat cover made of towel fabric. Now the seat itself is 1) warmed with a the built-in heater.
In 1980, a toilet manufacturer released a new product named "Washlet" which has a built-in shower 2) sprayer in 3) the toilet bowl.  4) It had the  with the attention-grabbing slogan copy of "The bottom wants to be washed." It has been getting more and more popular, and they say 50% of the whole 5) all households have it at present. I heard some tourists from other countries said that they were too afraid to touch the buttons.
In a 6) the latest toilet cubicle, you will see a hook to hang your bag, disinfectant to sterilize the toilet seat, fake flushing sound machine to 7) muffle the actual sound, a baby chair to hold your baby, toilet training seat and the most recent addition of a cane holder for the elderly. 

1) 暖められたからwarmed.  (過去形の受身形なんです。)

2) showerは普通にお手洗いに装置されるシャワーそのものを指し示す言葉で、sprayerは何かを噴出すものです。

4) 新しい文を始めた方がいいと思います。 で、どうしてcopyという言葉を選択したか知りませんが、slogan(標語、あるいはスローガン)がその文脈に適切なようです。 

5) wholeは当然ながら全部の意味ですが、意味合いがちょっと違います。 例えば:

I ate one whole soft-shelled turtle.  私は鼈を一匹全部食べてしまった。

でも全員、みんなのことを話すと、The whole householdsではなくてall householdsです。 なぜなら多数の家庭がありますから。 The whole countryで言ってもいいのは、countryが一つしかないからですが、複数ならallの方がいいです。 (例を挙げるとAll the nations in the worldが頭に浮かんで来ました)

Yuchamさんが英語を何年間勉強してきましたか? 何と上手な作文だと思います。

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I don't think this product sells well in other countries, but I heard there were some people who liked it very much and brought it back to their own countries.
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Japan companies tend to over-engineer everything. Keep adding new fancy features often results in high product cost and low marginal benefits. Such tendency may work well in cost-insensitive Japan domestic market. It sometimes does not work well in oversea markets.

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