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My day (please correct) I woke up early, at 6:30am. I had a quick breakfast. I was eating when my phone rang. I got a call from my coworker. She said that there is no need to be at work today. Despite this I went to work. In fact there was nothing to do today, so I left work 3 hours later. I was at home at after 11am. I was cooking. I prepared roasted chicken. There was nothing to do at home as well. I was reading, playing video games, and watching series. Weather is horrible this week. I decided to spend the rest of the day on learning English.

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Comment: this is mostly technically correct but it sounds stiff. A more natural way of writing would be to use sentences with more conjunctions. Here I have rewritten your paragraph to be a little more natural: 

I woke up early at 6:30am and had a quick breakfast. I was eating when my phone rang, the call was from my coworker. She said that there is no need to be at work today. Despite this, I went to work, but in fact there was nothing to do, so I left 3 hours later. I returned home at 11am and cooked a roast chicken. There was nothing to do at home as well. I read, played video games, and watched a series. The weather is horrible this week. I decided to spend the rest of the day learning English.
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My day (please correct)

I woke up early, at 6:30am. I had a quick breakfast. I was eating when my phone rang. I got a call from my coworker. She said that there is no need to be at work today. Despite this, I went to work. In fact there was nothing to do today, so I left work 3 hours later. I was at home at after 11am. I was cooking. I prepared roasted chicken. There was nothing to do at home as well. I was reading, playing video games, and watching TV series. The weather is horrible this week. I decided to spend the rest of the day on learning English.



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