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Eric
My secret Every one have their own secrets. Most of them are privacy and personal. Yesterday, I heard a secret about my teammate's husband dead beacuse of cancer last month. I am surprised and feel sad. Why she didn't say anything to us. We would like to comfort her. But if we did this that seems we didn't respect her secret. We don't want to let her know that we've know her secret and also could conform her. How to do this? It seems a difficult question for us.

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My Secret

Everyone has their own secrets. Most of them are private and personal. Yesterday, I heard a secret about my teammate's husband death because of cancer last month. I was surprised and felt sad. Why didn't she say anything to us? We would like to comfort her. But if we had comforted her, it would seem as if we didn't respect her secret. We don't want to let her know that we now know her secret. How do Ido this? It's a difficult question for us.


Very good! 

-標題裡面的每一個詞的第一個字都要大寫

-Everyone是一個詞

-Privacy為名詞;pivate為形容詞

-Dead為形容詞;death為名詞

-注意一下拼寫

-你要注意一下如何用英文問問題。“How to___”為錯誤的結構。應該是“How do/should/can___”。

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