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我在日本的旅行 我在日本的旅行 今年的春假的时候, 我去过日本。 (This year’s winter break, I went to Japan.) 我觉得日本的天气很舒服因为春天没有冬天冷。(Spring is not as cold as Winter.) 还有冬天不如春天常是晴天。(Also, winter is not as sunny as spring.) 日本的交通很方便。 (Japan’s transportation is convenient.) 日本很有意思因为开车跟坐火车去旅行当然不一样快。(Japan is interesting because driving is not as fast as taking the train to travel.) 骑自行车比租车方便。(Riding a bike is more convenient than renting a car.) 有时搭船不比搭地铁省钱。搭船很非常贵!(Taking the ferry is not as money saving as taking the subway. Taking the ferry is expensive!) 我每天一边走路, 一边用电话因为我在日本一直迷路。 (Everyday I walked and used my phone at the same time because I got lost in Japan all the time.) 我觉得美国人和日本人不一样健康。 日本人比较健康因为他们常常走路。。(I think that Americans and Japanese people are not equally healthy. Japanese people are healthier because they often walk.) 所有火车站都在午夜关闭。每天晚上, 我只好走路回家因为我总是错过最后一班火车。(All train stations close at midnight. I didn’t have a choice but to walk home because I always missed the last train.) 谢谢!

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我在日本的旅行

我在日本的旅行

今年的春假的时候, 我去过日本。 今年春假我去了日本。 (This year’s winter break, I went to Japan.)


我觉得日本的天气很舒服,因为春天没有冬天冷。(Spring is not as cold as Winter.) 还有而且冬天不如春天常是晴天。(Also, winter is not as sunny as spring.)

日本的交通很方便。 (Japan’s transportation is convenient.)

日本很有意思,因为開車去旅行不會比搭火車還要快。开车跟坐火车去旅行当然不一样快。(Japan is interesting because driving is not as fast as taking the train to travel.)

骑自行车比租车方便。(Riding a bike is more convenient than renting a car.)

有时搭船不比搭地铁省钱。搭船很非常贵!(Taking the ferry is not as money saving as taking the subway. Taking the ferry is expensive!)

我每天一边走路, 一边用电话因为我在日本一直迷路。因為常常迷路,所以我在日本幾乎都要邊走路邊拿著手機確認地圖。 (Everyday I walked and used my phone at the same time because I got lost in Japan all the time.)

我觉得美国人和日本人不一样健康。 日本人比较健康因为他们常常走路。或許因為在日本,人們比較常需要走路,所以我覺得日本人可能會比美國人更健康。。(I think that Americans and Japanese people are not equally healthy. Japanese people are healthier because they often walk.)

所有火车站都在午夜关闭
。火車在深夜過後會停駛,加上我總是錯過最後一班列車,所以每天晚上我都只能走路回家。每天晚上, 我只好走路回家因为我总是错过最后一班火车。(All train stations close at midnight. I didn’t have a choice but to walk home because I always missed the last train.)

谢谢!

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我在日本的旅行

我在日本的旅行

今年的春假的时候, 我去过日本。 (This year’s winter break, I went to Japan.)

我觉得日本的天气很舒服因为春天没有冬天冷。(Spring is not as cold as Winter.) 还有冬天不如春天常是晴天。(Also, winter is not as sunny as spring.)

日本的交通很方便。 (Japan’s transportation is convenient.)

日本很有意思,因为开车去旅行没有坐火车快。(Japan is interesting because driving is not as fast as taking the train to travel.)

骑自行车比租车方便。(Riding a bike is more convenient than renting a car.)

有时搭船不比搭地铁省钱。搭船很非常贵!(Taking the ferry is not as money saving as taking the subway. Taking the ferry is expensive!)

我每天一边走路, 一边打电话因为我在日本一直迷路。 (Everyday I walked and used my phone at the same time because I got lost in Japan all the time.)

我觉得美国人和日本人健康程度不一样。 日本人比较健康因为他们常常走路。。(I think that Americans and Japanese people are not equally healthy. Japanese people are healthier because they often walk.)

所有火车站都在午夜关闭。每天晚上, 我只好走路回家因为我总是错过最后一班火车。(All train stations close at midnight. I didn’t have a choice but to walk home because I always missed the last train.)

谢谢!

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