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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Oh,It's a difficulty for me,What i can write? I broin in shanDong prevince chinese. I live in Guang dong prevince now, I leant finance in colleage. After graduation,I came to Guang dong with my classmate,Then I worked in Delta for 15 years .In there,I lent a lot, and made a lot of friends.Many friends had asked me why came to Guang dong,It is too far from my home town,Yes,It is really too far,If i go home by plane,It would spend 3 hours.Perhaps it because of fate. I hardly use english in my work. SO It's a difficulty for me to write a letter in english about myself. I want to learn english,and i want to make friends with you.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Oh, It's a difficulty for me,What i can write? I broin in shanDong prevince chinese. I live in Guang dong prevince now, I leant finance in colleage.

Oh, its difficult for me, what will I write? I was born in Shandong province in China, but now I live in Guangdong province. I studied finance at college.

After graduation, I came to Guang dong with my classmate,Then I worked in Delta for 15 years .In there,I lent a lot, and made a lot of friends.Many friends had asked me why came to Guang dong,It is too far from my home town,Yes,It is really too far,If i go home by plane,It would spend 3 hours.Perhaps it because of fate.

After I graduated, I came to Guangdong with my classmate. Then I worked in Delta for 15 years. There I learn't a lot, and made a lot of friends. Many of my friends have asked me why I came to Guangdong, as it is far away from my home town. It really is far away, if I went home by plane, it would take 3 hours! Perhaps fate brought me here.

I hardly use english in my work. SO It's a difficulty for me to write a letter in english about myself. I want to learn english,and i want to make friends with you.

I hardly use English at work, so it's difficult for me to write a letter in English about myself. I want to learn English and I want to be friends with you.

 

 

Usually English people say "it's difficult for me" and not "its a difficulty for me" :) Your English is good though! :)

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