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Please check my English. I went to an exciting concert today. Its group makes up of almost similar age as me. They always give me courage and spirit. After that, I'm getting motivated for the job and English goal better than yesterday by them. I thought that artist has a very strong transmission power. I'd like to become a having person who has transmission power as same as them.

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I went to an exciting concert today.
Its group makes up of almost similar age as me.
They always give me courage and spirit.
After that, I'm getting motivated for the job and English goal better than yesterday by them.
I thought that artist has a very strong transmission power.
I'd like to become a having person who has transmission power as same as them.

I went to an exciting concert today. The group members were of my age. They always give me courage and spirit. After that, I got more motivation for the job and English goal than yesterday. 
I think those artists are great influencers. I'd like to become an influencer like them.

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