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預備杯茶嘅我個方法 我幾乎每日都飲啲茶。如果飲綠茶，寧願冇糖嘅茶。 但如果飲杯紅茶，就會想加啲奶同啲糖。 有時冇糖嘅紅茶幾好，但係其實我唔真鍾意冇奶嘅紅茶。 最近飲緊好多薑茶。已經預備杯茶之後，时时都想加多啲薑。 我有薑奶茶粉，所以預備杯茶唔係好難。 我又有薑粉，所以加多啲薑喺杯茶都唔係好難。

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我幾乎每日都飲啲茶。如果飲綠茶，寧願飲冇糖嘅茶。
但如果飲杯紅茶，就會想加啲奶同啲糖。
有時冇糖嘅紅茶幾好，但係其實我唔真係咁鍾意冇奶嘅紅茶。

最近飲緊好多薑茶。已經預備沖好杯茶之後，时时都想加多啲薑。
我有薑奶茶粉，所以預備沖杯茶唔係好難。
我又有薑粉，所以加多啲薑喺杯茶都唔係好難。
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我幾乎每日都飲啲茶。如果飲綠茶，寧願冇糖嘅茶。 但如果飲杯紅茶，就會想加啲奶同啲糖。 有時冇糖嘅紅茶幾好，但係其實我唔鍾意冇奶嘅紅茶。 最近飲緊好多薑茶。已經預備杯茶之後，时时都想加多啲薑。 我有薑奶茶粉，所以預備杯茶唔係好難。 我又有薑粉，所以加多啲薑喺杯茶都唔係好難。

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預備杯茶嘅我個方法

我幾乎每日都飲啲茶。如果飲綠茶，我寧願飲冇糖嘅茶。
但如果飲杯紅茶，就會想加啲奶同啲糖。
有時飲冇糖嘅紅茶都幾好，但係其實我唔多鍾意冇奶嘅紅茶。

最近飲緊好多薑茶。已經預備杯茶之後，时时都想加多啲薑。
我有薑奶茶粉，所以預備杯茶唔係好難。
我又有薑粉，所以加多啲薑喺杯茶都唔係好難。

I am sorry for comment something at first coz my English isn’t pretty good, but hope you for understanding.

The colour label:
Yellow: Maybe Multiple meaning
Green: what I suggested
Orange: suggests to cancel
Purple: Selective deletion
Light blue: Simplified Chinese
Underline: if it is speaking, not suggested this expression, although understand what you mean.

The following is some own suggestions for reference only :

我幾乎每日都飲啲茶。
> not sure you mean “ 啲 “, in this case, this “ 啲 ” is “ different kinds of “ or “ a lots of ”.
The former one meaning is suggested to correct as “我幾乎每日都飲唔同嘅茶”
The latter one meaning is suggested to correct as “我幾乎每日都飲茶”

最近飲緊好多薑茶。
> “ Recently, (I am) drinking lots of Ginger tea”
so that, it is also have two meanings I guess.
If you mean” always drink” , you should cancel “緊“
because it means “ ing “ form and you are keeping doing
then you can say: 最近飲好多薑茶。

飲杯紅茶
> quantifier「杯」normally appear with amount.
If it is a specific things: Give me a / the ginger tea. （Order tone & the amount is 1)
it will appear 杯 same as 「比杯薑茶我」
Amount is 2 & 3 : 「比兩杯薑茶我」「比三杯薑茶我」
Habit or noun are suggested to change it be “飲紅茶”
If we directly compare the part of speech, same as
但 如果 飲紅茶... <=> However, if ( I ) drinking black tea...

时时
> Reminder: It is Simplified Chinese
Traditional Chinese is “時時”
Or you can also say: “ 成日 ”


預備杯茶嘅我個方法
> I am sorry to say it maybe not fluent.
The problem probably is on the word orders.
It can directly translate to “My way of prepared a cup of tea”and it is suggested to change it to” 我 預備杯茶 嘅方法“

Moreover, the content is mainly described your habit of prepared a cup of tea. The “方法” maybe changed it to “習慣” is better?

Hopefully help you






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