Please help me correct my English: My Son's Weight Control 2
Our family live (or lives?) inside a campus and always went to the cafeterias to eat. Seldom did we eat at home. The food in the cafeterias is cost-economic as the university receives the government sponsorship for food(is there another way to say that?). A lot of times, the price for the food is even cheaper than the raw materials it is made of. However, the cafeteria food always has GMO and too much oil in it. We start to eat at home much more often now. Instead of white-rice , we now eat rice mixed with other grains.
We promised my son to hold two birthday parties , one for his class , one for his other close friends, if he could reduce the weight to 44kg by his birthday.
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My family resides inside a campus and we seldom eat at home choosing instead to eat at the cafeterias within the campus. The food in the cafeterias is economical since it is subsidized by the grant which the university receives from the government. Many a times, the the food is even cheaper than the raw materials it is made from. However, the cafeteria food is not GMO free and is also too much oily. We have started eating much more often at home now. Instead of white-rice , we now eat rice mixed with other grains.
We promised my son that we would hold two birthday parties for him, one for his class and another one for his other close friends, if he managed to reduce his weight to 44kg by his birthday.
We promised my son that we would hold two birthday parties for him, one for his class and another one for his other close friends, if he managed to reduce his weight to 44kg by his birthday.
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In the U.S. the family is singular, so our family resides ; in Britain it's plural, so that family reside.
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