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The oldest person in my family is my grandmother.
She was born in a small town near XXX in 1919 called YYY.
This is a town dedicated to farming.
When she was little, at that timie, children had to work and didn't study. She helped her parents.
When she was young, met to my granfather and the got married.
After that they moved to XXX and had a business, a bar.
In 1994 my granfather died and today my granmother is in an old peoples's home. And is 100 years old.
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The oldest person in my family is my grandmother. She was born in a small town near XXX in 1919 called YYY.This is a town is dedicated to farming.
When she was little, at that timie, children had to work and didn't study. She helped her parents.
When she was young, she met to my grandfather and they got married.
After that they moved to XXX and started had a business, a bar.
In 1994 my grandfather died and today my grandmother is in an old people's's home, she And is 100 years old.
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The oldest person in My oldest family member is my grandma. Makes it more personal and to connect to the reader. Makes the reader thinks of his own grandmother.She was born in a small town of YYY near XXX in 1919 called YYY. This is a farming town dedicated to farming. When she was a little tot, she helped the family by working - such was the time of those days. at that timie, children had to work and didn't study. She helped her parents. Then she was young, met to my grandpa father and the got and she married young. After that they moving to XXX, they started a bar business and had a business, a bar. In 1994, my granfather died grandpa passed away and today she my granmother is in an old peoples's an old folks home and is 100 a hundred years old.
Congratulations to her! BTW "old folks home" and even "nursing home" may sound old fashioned and institutional. Today the terms, "help facility", "assisted living facility", "senior living facility" and "independent living facility" are preferred.
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The oldest person in my family is my grandmother.She was born in a small town near XXX in 1919 called YYY.
This is a town dedicated to farming.
When she was little, at that time, children had to work and didn't study. She helped her parents.
When she was young, met to my grandfather and they got married.
After that, they moved to XXX and had a business, a bar.
In 1994 my grandfather died, and today my grandmother is in an old peoples' home. And is 100 years old.
Hello. I noticed a few errors and corrected them for you. I look forward to reading more from you.
Teacher Keevan :-)
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