The Second Day In Italki

Today is my second day in Italki. I'm very happy as I have six foreign friends now. They are all very kind and helpful. I learnt a lot from them - I learned something about English food, and something about America. Also I was also improved able to improve my English. My type typing speed was is very slow ,but my friends didn't get angry. They have a lot of much patience to in teaching me.

Thank you my friends.

You don't need to leave a new line with every beginning sentence.  Only in poetry do you to this.  You have many punctuation errors, both in usage and presentation.  You need to study the rules.  For example, no commas before conjunctions such as "but", "or" "and" etc.  Leave 2 spaces after the period and a space after a comma.  Hope you will write more and get corrected.  This is the only way to improve the language short of living in the country where it is widely spoken.

The Second Day In Italki

Today is my second day in Italki.
I'm very happy. I have six foreign friends now. They are all very kind and helpful. I have learned a lot from them.
I learned something about English food,and something about America. I've also improved my English. My typing speed was very slow, but my friends didn't get angry. They have a lot of patience to teach me.
Thank you my friends.

Hi! I'm Hannah by the way, hope we can be friends too :)