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poem(这是一首中国的古诗，我用英文翻译的，thank you , Amaya)

You live by the source of the river ,
while I ,
live nearby the mouth of the river ,
I drink the water you have touched ,
through the elongated river.

I know ,
I know ,.
but my love extends like the river ,
I know you know ,
I wish you would know

The river flows and never stops,
so does my love ,
I only wish that your heart is mine ,

When the river connects you & me ,
the river elongates.