Are these sentences correct?
1) Although it is raining, I'm going to go to the party.
2) You're feeling bad because you haven't been taking the pill.
3) Nations hate much more from each other due to wars in the world.
4) The match was cancelled because of raining.
5) We no need to turning off manually TV due to development of technology.
6) She has been sent İstanbul to living with her grandmother because her parents were killed by an accident.
7) Because of the fact that he bought a new car, he began to work for hospital again in order to pay expenses.
8) She is learning English because of finding a better job.
9) Because of the fact that there is a hospital, we avoid making a noise.
10) We took hard precautions in order to prevent probable problems.
11) While we were doing all the work, they were looking enjoy themselves.
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1) Although it is raining, I'm going to go to the party. Correct
2) You're feeling bad because you haven't been taking the your pills.
3) Nations hate much more from each other due to wars in the world. This sentence is incorrect and I am not sure of the message you are trying to convey. Do you perhaps mean to say that more nations today hate each other or have bad relations, due to the wars in the world?
4) The match was cancelled because of the raining. Correct, but you would not say "...of raining...", instead you would say "it rained" or "it is raining", or "the rain". Further, because you are speaking of the past (match WAS cancelled), you cannot say "raining" which is the present tense.
You could say, "the match was cancelled because it rained", or, "the match will be cancelled because it is raining..."
5) We do not need to manually turning off manually the TV, due to developments of in technology.
6) She has been sent to İstanbul to living live with her grandmother because her parents were killed by in an accident.
7) Because of the fact that he bought a new car, he has started began to work for the hospital again, in order to pay expenses.
8) She is learning English because of in order to finding a better job.
9) Because of the fact that there is a hospital, we avoid making a noise. This sentence could be written in a much better manner; however, before I make a suggestion, I must know how are you likely to disturb the hospital...? For example, do you live next door? Are you on the hospital premieses? Some context would be great.
10) We took hard precautions in order to prevent probable problems. Correct, although I would say "extreme precautions..." or "...necessary precautions...", depending on what you mean.
11) While we were doing all the work, they were looking enjoying themselves. Or, "while we were working hard, they appeared to be enjoying themselves...".
Very good! I notice you use the word "because" a lot; here are some synonyms you can use:
- as (example: I do not trust her as she lied to me in the past).
- For (example: I do not drink milk, for I am lactose intolerant)
- Due to (example: The match was cancelled due to the rain)
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Are these sentences correct?
1) Although it is raining, I'm going to go to the party. - this one is ok, although a native speaker would probably say "Although it is raining, I'm STILL going to the party".
2) You're feeling bad because you haven't been taking the pill. - In the US, and probably in other English-speaking countries, "the pill" means birth control pills, so unless that is what you meant, you should probably say "because you haven't been taking your pills".
3) Nations hate much more from each other due to wars in the world. -I think you mean something like "Wars cause nations to hate each other more".
4) The match was cancelled because of raining. - We would say "The match was canceled due to rain".
5) We no need to turning off manually TV due to development of technology. - Here it would be better to say: "We do not need to turn off the TV by hand because we have technology (a remote control)".
6) She has been sent İstanbul to living with her grandmother because her parents were killed by an accident. - She was sent to Istanbul to LIVE with her grandmother because her parents were killed IN an accident.
7) Because of the fact that he bought a new car, he began to work for hospital again in order to pay expenses. - A more natural way to say this would be: "Since he bought the car, he started working at the hospital again in order to pay for it".
8) She is learning English because of finding a better job. - She is learning English so that she can find a better job.
9) Because of the fact that there is a hospital, we avoid making a noise. - I understand what you are trying to say, but again, a more natural way of saying this might be: We are near a hospital, so we need to be quiet".
10) We took hard precautions in order to prevent probable problems. - Again, I understand your point, but a better sentence would be: "We took strong precautions in order to prevent likely problems".
11) While we were doing all the work, they were looking enjoy themselves. - We would say "While we were doing all the work, they were having a good time".
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1) Although it is raining, I'm still gonna go to the party. 2) You're feeling bad because you haven't taken your pill. 3) Nations hate each other rather due to wars in the world. 4) The match was cancelled because of the rain. 5) We don't need to turn off TV manually owing to development of technology. 6) She has been sent to İstanbul to live with her grandmother as her parent were killed by an accident. 7) since he bought a new car, he began to work for hospital again in order to pay expenses. 8) She is learning English in the hope of finding (or in a bid to find) a better job. 9) since there is a hospital, we have to avoid making noises 10) We took hard precautions in order to prevent probable problems. 11) we were doing all the work While they were enjoying themselves.
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