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Can you check my entry's grammer Behavioral Economics is an independent subdiscipline of economics and awarded several times with Nobel Prizes. It explores people’s economics decision processes and the results of these decisions with scientific manner. Classical economics approach assumes that people are rational about their choices and only aim at personal maximization. However, behavioral economics suggests that because people have psychological biases, and bounded rationality and because we are social being, the idea of maximization cannot be valid in all cases. Recently, behavioral economic research and insights began to be used for making public policy, as this approach offers low-cost, effective and evidence-based policy.

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Can you check my entry's grammar

Behavioral (in British English this would be "Behavioural")  Economics is an independent subdiscipline of economics, and several Nobel Prizes for Economics have been awarded to behavioral economists. Behavioral  economists explore people’s decision-making processes, and the results of those decisions, in economic contexts. Classical economics approaches assume that people make rational choices and aim at the maximization of their personal profit or utility. However, behavioral economics explores the idea that, because people have psychological biases, because there are boundaries to rationality, and because we are social beings, the idea of maximization may not be valid or useful in all cases. Recently, behavioral economics research and insights have begun to be influential in the formulation of public policy, as following this approach can suggest low-cost, effective and evidence-based options to policy-makers.

I've rewritten this a little freely, to try to catch what I think is your meaning in a fluent manner. Many of these suggestions are for better style or greater clarity, and not because of any errors in the original. Of course do feel free to ignore any or all suggestions ! :) 

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Can you check my entry's grammer grammar.

Behavioral Economics is an independent subdiscipline of economics and has been awarded several times with Nobel Prizes(*). It explores people’s economics decision processes and the results of these decisions with a scientific manner. Classical economics approach assumes (or "The approach in classical economics is to assume ...") that people are rational about their choices and only aim at personal maximization. However, behavioral economics suggests that because people have psychological biases, and bounded rationality and because we are social beings, the idea of maximization cannot be valid in all cases. Recently, behavioral economic research and insights began to be used for making public policy, as this approach offers low-cost, effective and evidence-based policy.

(*) I corrected the grammar, but it still doesn't quite make sense, as a subdiscipline isn't a person and can't win a Nobel Prize. You could say something like "... and several times behavioral economists have been awarded the Nobel Prize" or "... and has produce a number of Nobel Prize winners".

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