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A special event in my life There was a very particular event in my life and this is not what we could expect when we ask someone "Tell me about a special event in your life". This event was my little sister's birth. I was 5 years old and I have always wanted a sister. I was so excited the last months before her birth. I was too young to be aware that my mum was having difficulties to have a second child, she had to do a IVF and to keep calm during the pregnancy. My parents didn't choose the baby's gender but I was certain it would be a little girl. My mum asked me if I would be happy anyway if it was a boy. I answer that I would be but I knew that it would be a girl. Since that time I'm a very protective grand sister and I protect her as if I were her mom. Sometimes it's helpful because she is clumsy and she forget a lot of things but sometimes she reproached it to me. I understood how she feels and I tried not to do too much but she needed time to understand it was all about love. We have a very particular relationship. Now she became a very different person compared to me. We often misunderstood, we had argues but we always missed each other.

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A special event in my life

There was a very particular event in my life and this is not what we could ("would" or "might" might be better than "could" here) expect when we ask someone "Tell me about a special event in your life". This event was my little sister's birth. I was 5 years old and I have had always wanted a sister. I was so excited the last months before her birth. I was too young to be aware that my mum was having difficulties to have having a second child, she had to do have a IVF and to keep calm during the pregnancy. My parents didn't choose the baby's gender but I was certain it would be a little girl. My mum asked me if I would be happy anyway if it was a boy. I answered that I would be but I knew that it would be a girl. Since that time I'm a very protective grand big sister and I protect her as if I were her mom. Sometimes it's helpful because she is clumsy and she forgets a lot of things but sometimes she reproached it to me reproaches me for it. I understood how she feels and I tried not to do too much but she needed time to understand it was all about love. We have a very particular relationship. Now she became a very different person compared to me. We often misunderstood each other, we had argues arguments but we always missed each other.

I got a bit confused about which tense you wanted to use in the last few sentences.

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There was a very particular event in my life and this is not what we could expect when we ask someone "Tell me about a special event in your life". This event was my little sister's birth. I was 5 years old and I always wanted a sister. I was so excited the last months before her birth. I was too young to be aware that my mum was having difficulties to have a second child, she had to do a IVF and to keep calm during the pregnancy. My parents didn't choose the baby's gender but I was certain it would be a little girl. My mum asked me if I would be happy anyway if it was a boy. I answer that I would be but I knew that it would be a girl. Since that time I'm a very protective grand sister and I protect her as if I were her mom. Sometimes it's helpful because she is clumsy and she forget a lot of things but sometimes she reproached it to me. I understood how she feels and I tried not to do too much but she needed time to understand it was all about love. We have a very particular relationship. Now she became a very different person compared to me. We often misunderstood, we had argues but we always missed each other



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There was a very particular event in my life and this is not what we could expect when we ask someone "Tell me about a special event in your life". This event was my little sister's birth. I was 5 years old and I always wanted a sister. I was so excited the last months before her birth. I was too young to be aware that my mum was having difficulties to have a second child, she had to do a IVF and to keep calm during the pregnancy. My parents didn't choose the baby's gender but I was certain it would be a little girl. My mum asked me if I would be happy anyway if it was a boy. I answer that I would be but I knew that it would be a girl. Since that time I'm a very protective grand sister and I protect her as if I were her mom. Sometimes it's helpful because she is clumsy and she forget a lot of things but sometimes she reproached it to me. I understood how she feels and I tried not to do too much but she needed time to understand it was all about love. We have a very particular relationship. Now she became a very different person compared to me. We often misunderstood, we had argues but we always missed each other.
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There was a very particular event in my life and this is not what we could expect when we ask someone "Tell me about a special event in your life". This event was my little sister's birth. I was 5 years old and I always wanted a sister. I was so excited the last months before her birth. I was too young to be aware that my mum was having difficulties to have a second child, she had to do a IVF and to keep calm during the pregnancy. My parents didn't choose the baby's gender but I was certain it would be a little girl. My mum asked me if I would be happy anyway if it was a boy. I answer that I would be but I knew that it would be a girl. Since that time I'm a very protective grand sister and I protect her as if I were her mom. Sometimes it's helpful because she is clumsy and she forget a lot of things but sometimes she reproached it to me. I understood how she feels and I tried not to do too much but she needed time to understand it was all about love. We have a very particular relationship. Now she became a very different person compared to me. We often misunderstood, we had argues but we always missed each other.
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There was a very particular event in my life and this is not what we could expect when we ask someone "Tell me about a special event in your life". This event was my little sister's birth. I was 5 years old and I always wanted a sister. I was so excited the last months before her birth. I was too young to be aware that my mum was having difficulties to have a second child, she had to do a IVF and to keep calm during the pregnancy. My parents didn't choose the baby's gender but I was certain it would be a little girl. My mum asked me if I would be happy anyway if it was a boy. I answer that I would be but I knew that it would be a girl. Since that time I'm a very protective grand sister and I protect her as if I were her mom. Sometimes it's helpful because she is clumsy and she forget a lot of things but sometimes she reproached it to me. I understood how she feels and I tried not to do too much but she needed time to understand it was all about love. We have a very particular relationship. Now she became a very different person compared to me. We often misunderstood, we had argues but we always missed each other.

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