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A short paragraph Hi everyone, Could you please help me to correct this paraghraph ? and thanks in advance I think I’m the person that you are looking for. I’m autonomous and I work hard. If I get fourteen in the average of these three semesters it’s because I do extra outside the class. I’m also disciplined, I come in the time and I do my homework. Furthermore I have a team spirit. In fact, I can work with everyone. So I hope that I could be accepted in your school.

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I believe I’m the person that you are looking for. I’m independent and a hard worker. I do extra work outside of the classroom. I come to class on time and always do my homework. Furthermore I have team spirit. In fact, I can work with anyone.
I hope to be accepted in your school.


This would be a grammatically correct way of speaking, though I do believe this can be revised and improved so that you get the best most professional message across. I can help you create a better statement if you want, let me know!

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