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A Changed Plan It was 2000 and during the summer holiday, one day two of my friends proposed that we should climb a nearby mountain and search for some mushrooms in the next day. It was a great proposal and we were all excited to spend our time there. We were very happy to have the opportunity to have such activity. The weather forecast showed that there was little possibility of rain and the temperature would remain almost the same tomorrow. But our luck must have been quite bad as the weather completely changed in the next morning. At first, there was too little rain, combined with some light winds. But then the wind changed and became stronger. At the same time heavy rain started falling. The mountain was not a good place to visit that day. It was a two-hour journey and we were supposed to go there early next morning. However, the weather condition forced us to abandon the trip and stay home. The weather is so bad that we all have to stay at home. "When my parents declared that we have to cancel our climbing trip, we planned to cook with my parents at home. At around 12.30 am, when the weather was still bad, we were busy with cooking. We ate rice, tofu, beef and some vegetables. After lunch we played different types of indoor games and that was fun.in the evening, the rain stopped and my friends left our house. Though our initial plan was ruined due to a sudden weather change, nevertheless, we still enjoyed some time with each other. It is a happy memory for all of us.

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The text is very well corrected so I have more suggestions for more natural sounding expressions than corrections.
suggestions in green: search for collect some mushrooms
corrections in yellow: tomorrow the day after
A Changed Plan
It was 2000 and during the summer holiday of the year 2000, one day two of my friends proposed that we should climb a nearby mountain and search for some collect mushrooms in the next day. It was a great proposal and we were all excited to spend our timeabout going there . We were very happy to have the opportunity to have such activity.
The weather forecast showed that there was little possibility of rain and the temperature would remain almost the same tomorrow the day after. But our luck must have been quite badout as the weather completely changed in the next morning. At first, there was toojust a little rain, combined with some light winds. But then the wind changed and became stronger. At the same time heavy rain started falling. The mountain was not a good place to visit that day. It was a two-hour journey and we were supposed to go there early next morning. However, the weather condition forced us to abandon the trip and stay home. The weather is was so bad that we all have had to stay at home.

"When my parents declared that we have to cancel our climbing trip, we planned to cook with my parents at home. At around 12.30 am, when the weather was still bad, we were busy with cooking. We ate rice, tofu, beef and some vegetables. After lunch we played different types of indoor games and that was fun.in the evening, the rain stopped and my friends left our house.
Though our initial plan was ruined due to a sudden weather change, nevertheless, we still enjoyed spending some time with each other. It is a happy memory for all of us.

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