The house next door 🏠
This house was under construction two years ago but now its owners are ready to live in it. It was built on a larger area than the houses around but I think it has the same disadvantage that our house and all the neighbouring houses contain which is lacking of corridors around it. I think corridors grant the house a good airing and lighting. The other next door house which lies to the left of our house is now vacant with a leaflet on its door that displaying it for sale or renting. My family might leave this place within four months or more and I hope to get a beautiful house.
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The house next door 🏠
This house was under construction two years ago (1) but now its owners are ready to live in it. It was built on a larger area (2) than the houses around it, but I think it has the same disadvantage that our house and all the neighbouring houses contain have, which is lacking a lack of of corridors around it. I think corridors grant (3) the house a good airing and lighting. The other next door (4) house, which lies to the left of our house, is now vacant with a leaflet on its door that displaying that it is for sale or renting. My family might leave this place within four months or more, and I hope to get a beautiful house.--
Great writing Nada! Your writing is very clear and easy to understand.
(1) "Two years ago" means that it was under construction, then stopped for two years, then resumed. If you mean that construction has been continuous, you can say "has been under construction for two years".
(2) There is a specific word for this in English, you can say "plot of land" to mean the land that a house is built on.
(3) A better word here is probably "give". Grant is used for more "formal" things, like getting a grant from the government to do something.
(4) You can say "neighboring" instead of "next door", although both are clear.
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I mean a space round the house nit tobe stuck to the houses besides it.
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What part of the building should there be corridors?
is that like an entrance hallway?
I'm trying to understand what you mean by corridor?
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What part of the building should there be corridors?
is that like an entrance hallway?
I'm trying to understand what you mean by corridor?
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