Character

Some people think that participating in team sports helps to develop good character. I don't entirely agree with this view. opinion that participating in team sports helps to develop good character. First of all, a person's Human's character is not dependent on  sport, especially expecialy team sports. Personality and character rely on their its own properties and nature. Only up-bringing up and education can change character. For instace, a Brazilian footballer called PEPE is famouse for his bad (?)with bed character. In the other words, he never respects other footballers and he is really ill-tempered (?) bed-termed. Some people think that sports helps to develop good character, using as examples (?) and  take some arguments about sops sportsmen who are of se are good character, for instance, Messi, Kankava and others. But even so, I can't agree with this opinion. , in spite of this They really are not only really good football players but are of good also have best character. nevertheless However, sports haved not helped them to develop this good character. that is to say, Their up-bringing up and education helped them to develop it.

Well-written in places and interesting ideas!  Take care with your punctuation. Also some phrases are difficult to understand.

character

some people think that participating in team sports *can help to develop good *character. I don't entirely agree with *that opinion.  (that participating in team sports helps to develop good character. This is simply repetitive, I would suggest deleting it. ) First of all, Human's character is not depend *on sports, expecialy team sports. *Personally character rely on its own properties and nature. *Only *up bringing and *education can change character. For instace, Brazilian *football player, PEPE is *famous *for his bad character. In the other words, he never *respects other *football players and he *has a bad temper. Some people think that sports *help to develop good character and *argue that *sportsmen *have better character, such as: Messi, Kankava and others. But I can't agree with this *opinion. *In spite of *this, they are not only good football players but also have *good character. nevertheless, sports *have not helped them to develop good character. *In cunclusion (better wording for formal essay), *up bringing and education help to develop good character.

Note: you did very good. Most of the corrections were simple spelling mistakes and grammar. As noted, some word choices were changed for more formal english writing rather than informal.