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please correct some people think that participating in team sports helps to develop good character I don't entirely agree with the opinion that participating in team sports helps to develop good character. First of all, Human's character is not depend o sport, expecialy team sports. Personaly character rely on its own properties and nature. only bringing up and educate can change character. For instace, Brazilian footballer called PEPE is famouse with bed character. In the other words, he never respect other footballers and he is really bed-termed. Some people think that sports helps to develop good character and take some arguments about soprtsmen whose are good character: Messi, Kankava and others. But I can't agree with this opinion, in spite of this they really are not only good football players but also have best character. nevertheless, sports had not helped them to develop good character. that is to say, bringing up ad educate helped them to develop good character.

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Some people think that participating in team sports helps to develop good character. [I've highlighted the word simply because I've added a full stop after it.]

I don't entirely agree with that opinion that participating in team sports helps to develop good character.
First of all, human character is not dependent on sport, especially team sports. Personal character relies on its own properties and nature. Only upbringing up and education can change character.
For instance, a Brazilian footballer called Pepe is famouse with famously of bad character. In the other words, he never respects other footballers and he is really bed-termed bad-tempered. [? I'm not absolutely sure that was the word you meant.] 
Some people think that sports help to develop good character and take use some arguments about sportsmen who are of good character: Messi, Kankava and others. But I can't agree with this opinion. [I've highlighted 'opinion' simply because I've added a full stop.] Despite of this that opinion they really are not only simply good football players but who also have are of best good character. nevertheless, Sports had not helped them to develop good character. That is to say, upbringing up and education helped them to develop good character.

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