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The Restaurant of Order Mistakes
Yesterday, I went to the local library to study for an exam. I did not intend to look for a book, then, let alone read one, but by chance, I came across a book titled, The Restaurant of Order Mistakes. It turned out that I ended up reading that book instead of studying, because I had heard about that restaurant on the internet, and I was still very interested in learning more about it.
The restaurant only opened for 2 days in Japan, in September 2017, and was a social awareness project. All the employees who worked there had Alzheimer's disease, so naturally, they made some mistakes, but none of the customers--who knew exactly what to expect--seemed to care about it. I was quite impressed after reading the complete story, and I, too, agree that it was a wonderful idea.
I would highly recommend this book to everyone here. :)*
Hi. Good job! The changes that I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify and explain your ideas, and for ease of reading. Apologies if I misinterpreted your thoughts! I hope that this helps you. J.
*I did some research on the internet, which allowed me to discover and plug in the dates above. That, in turn, explained many things that your original post did not. If your post creates questions in the reader’s mind, you also need to supply answers to them. Similarly, the passage of time (as noted in dates, times, etc.) is important in English grammar with regards to tenses, so be sure to include them in your future post if relevant.
If anyone is interested, the below is the link that I read:
The Restaurant of Order Mistakes
Yesterday, I went to the local library to study for an exam.I was not actually going to read a book, but I found a book named called 'The Restaurant of Order Mistakes'.
I ended up reading the book instead of studying my stuff for my exam because I had been interested in the restaurant since I had heard about it on the internet.
The restaurant was had been opened for 2days in Japan.
It was kind of a social contribution project.
And all the employees working there had Alzheimer's disease.
So they made some mistakes while working, but every the customers did not care about it.
I was impressed to while reading the story and thought it was a brilliant idea.
I would like to recommend it to everyone here :)
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