My Spring Outing Yesterday
Chang and me went to Filoli and Half Moon Bay yesterday.
Filoli is on the way to Half Moon Bay and it is big beautiful manor that was once owned by a rich family Bourn. Only the first floor of the house is open to public, including the ballroom, the study, the library, the cloakroom, and the rooms for the servants. The spacious rooms and luxurious decoration remind me of the TV show The Downton Abbey.
After visiting the house, we explored the garden. Colorful flowers were blooming, signaling the arrival of spring. Spring is considered as the season of hope, since the cold winter ends and everything starts to grow again.
Then we drove to Half Moon Bay. But there was no much fun because all stores there had been closed - they closes at 5pm - and the wind from the sea made me feel cold. We had dinner at a Thai restaurant and didn't stay at Half Moon bay for long.
The trip ends but the nice memory lasts.
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My Spring Outing Yesterday
Chang and I went to Filoli and Half Moon Bay yesterday.Filoli is on the way to Half Moon Bay and it is a big beautiful manor house that was once owned by a rich family named Bourn. Only the first floor of the house is open to the public, including the ballroom, the study, the library, the cloakroom, and the rooms for the servants. The spacious rooms and luxurious decoration remind me of the TV show The Downton Abbey.
After visiting the house, we explored the garden. Colorful flowers were blooming, signaling the arrival of spring. Spring is considered as the season of hope since the cold winter ends and everything starts to grow again.
Then we drove to Half Moon Bay. But there it was not much fun because all the stores there had been closed - they close at 5 pm - and the wind from the sea made me feel cold. We had dinner at a Thai restaurant and didn't stay at Half Moon Bay for long.
The trip ends has ended but the nice lovely memory lasts.
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Thank you Chantal!
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'Chang and me is correct', but It's better used in speaking and is colloquial. If you use it in writing you will probably be corrected. Always use '[name] and I' in tests :)
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