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Argentina flagLeticia Carnelli
Are books in dangerous? Are books in dangerous? No one can deny that technology has advanced quickly in the last century and it has changed in our traditional modes of life. For example, the technology is replacing books for e-books. Today, few people read traditional books, many of them prefer to read e-books because they consider it better. However, others disagree and believe that nothing can replace books. From a social point of view, some people say that they enjoy reading books like novels, short stories etc., but they claim that books are too expensive so they use another alternative which is e-books. These people download an app in which they can find some free books. In addition, they believe that it is better not only because it can save money but it can also save space. In a tablet, you can have a lot of books. On the other hand, other people argue that traditional books are better than e-books. These people say that there is a connection between the reader and the book that there is not when you read electronic books because you can touch and observe the details of the book such as its cover, pages, its smell, illustrations, among other things. These people claim that books are by far the best way to read and enjoy a story. From an environmental point of view, some people claim that a lot of amount of trees are chopped down per year to made books and other things. These people believe that in a century with an increase of technological devices we should use these to read whatever we want to. So, thanks to this, deforestation can decrease significantly. However, others argue that during the last years, there are several books which are made with recycling pages in order to reduce deforestation and people can enjoy a traditional book knowing that they are reading a book made with recycles and at the same time they are contributing with the environment. To conclude, in the last decade, new technologies have changed our lifestyles such as the way in which we read a book. Some people say that e-books are better than books because of they can save money, space and also it helps to the environment. On the contrary, there are others who strongly believe that books are better than e-books. So, can electronic books replace books? What is your opinion?.

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From an environmental point of view, some people claim that a lot of amount a huge number of trees are chopped down per every year to madke books and other things. These people believe that, as we are living in a century with an increase of widely available technological devices, we should use these to read whatever we want to. So, thanks to this, deforestation can could decrease significantly. However, others argue that during the last few years, there are several books which are have been made with recycleding pages in order to reduce deforestation, and that people can enjoy a traditional book knowing that/safe in the knowledge that they are reading a book made with recycleds materials, and that at the same time they are contributing with to preserving the environment. 
To conclude, in the last decade, new technologies have changed our lifestyles dramatically, such as the way in which we read a books. Some people say that e-books are better than traditional/convencional books because of they can save money, space and also it helps to the environment. On the contrary, there are others who strongly believe that tradicional/convencional books are better than e-books. So, can electronic books replace books? What is your opinion?

Great job Leticia! I have made some corrections in red and stylistic suggestions in blue. I had to split the correction in two as for some reason the site wouldn't accept it all in one go. It's certainly an interesting debate. Whilst I definitely enjoy reading proper physical books I can't deny the advantages of ebooks, especially if you travel a lot. Ebook readers can also be fantastic for language learning, as once you have the dictionaries set up it's so easy to look up words you don't know. 

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also, we can discuss the subject, why not: Are books dangerous?
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Are books in danger?ous?

Are books in dangerous?
No one can deny that technology has advanced quickly in the last century and that it has changed in our traditional modes/way of life. For example, the technology is replacing books for with e-books. Today, few people read traditional books;, many of them prefer to read e-books because they consider it them better. However, others disagree and believe that nothing can replace conventional/traditional books.
From a social point of view, some people say that they enjoy reading books like novels, short stories etc., but they claim that books are too expensive so they use another alternative, which is/namely e-books. These people download an app in which they can find some free books. In addition, they believe that it is better not only because it can save money but also because it can also save space. In a tablet, you can have a lot of books. On the other hand, other people argue that traditional books are better than e-books. These people say that there is a connection between the reader and the book that there is not does not exist when you read electronic books, because you can touch and observe the details of the book such as its cover, pages, its smell and illustrations, among other things. These people claim that conventional/traditional books are by far the best way to read and enjoy a story.

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