The last episode made me cry
Today I finished watching a serie. The last episode was so beautiful and emotional that I literally started to cry. I haven't cried in a long time with a movie or serie, but this time I just couldn't help it. I loved that scene where the characters had been acting in a play, singing a song with a full orchestra. The piano, the woodwinds, the strings and the brasses, all instruments were in perfect harmony. This beautiful arrangement is what it made me cry.
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The Last Episode Made Me Cry
Today, I finally finished watching a series. Its last episode ended so beautifully, and was so emotionally stirring, that I literally started to cry. I have not cried over a movie or series in a long time, but in this instance, I just could not help it.
I absolutely loved that scene, the one where the characters were acting in a play, singing a song, while accompanied by a full orchestra. The piano, the woodwinds, the strings, and the brasses--all of the instruments were in perfect harmony. The awe-inspiring sound of that beautiful arrangement is what brought me to tears.*
Hi, Eliseo. Good job! The changes that I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify and explain your ideas, and for ease of reading. Apologies if I misinterpreted your thoughts! I hope that this helps you. J.
*Hmm… It would have been really nice if you had told us the name of the series so that we could enjoy it as well. (*-^)
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The last episode made me cry
Today I finished watching a TV series. The last episode was so beautiful and emotional that I literally started to cry. I haven't cried in a long time with while watching a movie or TV series, but this time I just couldn't help it. I loved the scene where the characters were acting in a play, singing a song with a full orchestra. The piano, the woodwinds, the strings and the brasses, all instruments were in perfect harmony. This beautiful arrangement is what it made me cry.Good job!
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The last episode made me cry
Today I finished watching a series. The last episode was so beautiful and emotional that I literally started to cry. I haven't cried in a long time with while watching a movie or a series, but this time I just couldn't help (myself or) it. I loved that scene where the characters had been were acting in a the play, singing a song with a full orchestra. The piano, the woodwinds, the strings and the brasses, all instruments were all in perfect harmony. This beautiful arrangement is what it made me cry.Nice writing. Nice story.
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