帮助/ 教孩子自己相信 第一部分

一部分的孩子，没有自己相信, 尤其是女孩。 自信心很弱/没有自信心。没有自己相信 is incorrect，没有 + noun.

怎么办法提高他们的自己相信？ 尊重自己？怎么/如何提升他们的自信心、让他们尊重自己？

对于这个话题，我最近看到一些报纸文章。Remember the comma.

作家建议一些方法。提出了一些建议/推荐了一些方法。建议一些方法 sounds off.
第一是表扬孩子尊重自己的特点。鼓励(encourage)孩子尊重自己的特点。表扬 is praise.

教他们为什么应该尊重自己。在现代的社会，尤其是电视节目，常常好像成功的人都是那种有钱，漂亮， 骄傲，坏脾气的人。幸福的人是赢彩票地的人，或者 youtubers 等不工作的人。好像这样的肤浅表面的特点使他们好相信自己/更加自信。肤浅 is a higher-register phrase than 表面. I know you want to practice using 表面, but here 肤浅 sounds better.

实际上就是相反的 It if fine but here is a better phrase:实际上恰恰相反。恰恰相反 is a nice phrase you can remember.

为了培养真正的自己相信须要尊重真正的,普遍特点和能力-比如努力，耐心，礼貌， 勇敢， 同情，诚实， 等等。

为了培养真正的自信，你应该尊重真正的普世价值(universal values)，比如努力、耐心 etc....（Notice it is not comma here）

这样的人都值得其他的人的尊重。也值得自己的尊重自己。值得他人的尊重……值得自己的尊重…… It rhymes.

Good job Ross! I learned a lot too. Hope to read more about your thoughts on this topic.

Helping/teaching children to have self-confidence.
Teaching children to have self-confidence is hard. Some children, don’t have self confidence, especially girls. How can we raise their self confidence. Value themselves. Recently I have read some articles in newspapers about this question where they suggest some strategies.
Firstly to encourage children to value their own qualities. Teach them that they should value themselves. In society today， especially in TV programs, if often seems that successful people are those rich good looking, arrogant bad tempered type of people. Happy people are those who win the lottery or youtubers who don’t work. It seems these types of superficial qualities give them self confidence.
In reality the opposite is true. In order to cultivate real self confidence you need to value real universal values. – for example hard work, patience, politeness, bravery, sympathy, honesty, etc. These types of people deserve the respect of others. Deserve to respect themselves.
作文的目的是为了练习使用关于- 尤其是, 尊重, 相反的, 表面的, 值得
I wasn’t really sure if 自己相信 is the correct translation of self-confidence.

Part 2 :
https://www.italki.com/entry/984026

帮助/ 教给孩子自信 第一部分

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