a rainy day
Today,when i wake up,it was raining.The sky is overcast.This kind of weather is affect person's mood.so i love sunny day,blue sky and white clouds.oh now it is raining particularly big,liking from box as poured out.The heavy rain,beijing road is full of water,car can not be driven,people also walk difficultly in the rain.So i hope the rain stop quickly.
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A Rainy Day
Today, when i woke up, it was raining. The sky is overcast. This kind of weather can affect a person's mood. So i love sunny days, blue skies and white clouds. Oh now it is raining particularly big, like it is being poured out from a box. Because of the heavy rain, Beijing roads are full of water, cars can not be driven, and people walk difficultly in the rain. So I hope the rain stops quickly.
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