emotions Good afternoon all great people over the world. I have been thinking about how to be more patient and sociable with others since I was 20 years old. The thing is that I am almost always close

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emotions Good afternoon all great people over the world. I have been thinking about how to be more patient and sociable with others since I was 20 years old. The thing is that I am almost always close minded which really have broungt me a huge variety of inconvenieces understanding some people. Thus, I do not have many friends to go out and have as normal people, a fantastic social life, which it is totaly affecting my life in all senses. For example when I talk with a millennial person I can hardly understand their joks, and the charaters of the movies that they love talking about. People also from my generation make fun of me. Something crusial is that I do not enjoy dancing and drinking alcohol so that is why I do not go out so often and when I hang out with some friends, my friends carry out some of their closest buddies, it makes me feel too nervous, which I usually do not utter any word all the time while we are togother. Have a great time!!

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Emotions

Good afternoon, all great people over around the world.

I have been thinking about how to be more patient and sociable with others since I was 20 years old. The thing is that (<--In casual speech, this is fine to say, but in formal writing, these are known as "filler" words that don't add any meaning.) I am almost always closed-minded, which really have has brought me a huge variety of inconveniences when it comes to understanding some people. Thus, I do not have many friends to go out with and have rely on as normal people, a fantastic social life, which it is totally affecting my life in all senses manners. For example, when I talk with a millennial person, I can hardly understand their jokes and the movie characters of the movies (<--Here, it sounds better if you shorten it to "movie characters.") that they love talking about. People also from my generation also make fun of me. Something crucial is that I do not enjoy dancing and drinking alcohol, so that is why I do not go out so very often, and when I hang out with some friends, my friends carry out bring some of their closest buddies, it which makes me feel too very nervous. which As a result, I usually do not utter any words all the time while we are together.
Have a great time!!

Your writing is good, Vicrei. I hope my corrections are helpful =)

emotions

Good afternoon to all the great people over around the world.
I have been thinking about how to be more patient and sociable with others since I was 20 years old. The thing is that I am almost always close minded which really have broungt has caused me a huge variety of inconvenieces difficulties with understanding some people. Thus, I do not have many friends to go out with and have a normal social life, as normal people, a fantastic social life, which it is totally affecting my life in every sense all senses. For example when I talk with a millennial person I can hardly understand their jokes, and I don't know the characters of the movies that they love talking about. People also from my generation also make fun of me. Something crucial is that I do not enjoy dancing and drinking alcohol so that is why I do not go out so often and when I hang out with some friends, my friends carry bring out some of their closest buddies, and that makes me feel too nervous, which so I usually do not talk utter any word all the time while we are together.
Have a great time!!

Good job.

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