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When I was a little girl When I was a little girl, I lived in a house in a small village. My house was know as " the green house" because it was green. Next to my house, there was a farm where there were a lot of animals as horses, cows or porks. To tell the truth, i dind't like theses animals, however, I used to visited them with my friend Tom, who lived in the farm and who had to take care of them. I tought that to live in the farm was boring, but my friend loved it. A few years later, I changed the house and I started to live in a big city. There, I began to miss the village and the farm. Actually the city was worse than the village; in the city I couldn`t go out at night, there was a lot of pollution and very much noise. Today, I'm living in a city, but after the years, usually, I think about the village, I would like to visit it sometime!

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When I was a Little Girl

When I was a little girl, I lived in a house in a small village. My house was know as " the green house" because it was green. Next to my house, there was a farm where there were a lot of animals such as horses, cows or pigs. To tell the truth, I didn't like these animals, however, I used to visit them with my friend Tom, who lived on the farm and who had to take care of them.
I thought that to live on the farm was boring but my friend loved it.
A few years later, I moved house and I started to live in a big city. There, I began to miss the village and the farm. Actually, the city was worse than the village. In the city, I couldn`t go out at night. There was a lot of pollution and so much noise. (or, it was very noisy/too noisy)
Today, I'm living in a city but after many years, I often think about the village. I would like to visit it sometime/someday!

Well done, Isa! Yes, I agree. A village has its advantages and disadvantages and you do miss what you got used to in the past. You appreciate what you took for granted but no longer have now. 

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When I was a little girl, I used to live in a small village . My house was known as " the green house" because it was green. Next to my house, there was a farm where a lot of animals were kept like horses, cows and porks. To be honest  i dind't like those animals. however, I used to visit  them with my friend Tom, who lived in that farm, in fact he was the one who took care of them.
i did not like living next to a farm it was boring, but my friend loved it.
A few years later, I changed the house and I went to live in a big city. There, I always  miss the village and the farm. Actually the city is worse than the village; in the city I can not go out at nights  there is  a lot of pollution and so much noise.
Today, I'm living in a city, but after so many years,  I often think about the village, I would like to visit it sometime!
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When I was a little girl

When I was a little girl, I lived in a house in a small village. My house was known  as " the green house" because it was green. Next to my house, there was a farm where there were a lot of animals as horses, cows and porks. To be honest To tell the truth, i didn’t  like these animals, however, I used to visited them with my friend Tom, who lived in the farm and who had to take care of them.
I thought  that to live in the farm was boring, but my friend loved it.
A few years later, I changed the house and I started to live in a big city. There, I began to miss the village and the farm. Actually the city was worse than the village; in the city I couldn`t go out at night, there was a lot of pollution and very much noise.
Today, I'm living in a city, but after the years, usually, I think about the village, I would like to visit it sometime!

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