New trousers
Dear Madam,
I received my trousers which I have recently bought at your shop. Unfortunately, I'm not very satisfied with the quality and hereafter I'm going to explain why.
First of all, the trousers are not in good condition: the colour is faded, the buttons fell off and they shrank a lot when I washed them. Now they are twice smaller in size.
Because of those mentioned defects, I would like to return them and I'm open to any solution; whether it comes about change for the new pair or a refund. Do you have any other suggestions?
Kind regards
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New trousers
Dear Madam,I received my trousers which I have recently bought at your shop. Unfortunately, I'm not very satisfied with the quality and I'm going to explain why.
First of all, the trousers are not in good condition: the colour is faded, the buttons fell off and they shrank a lot when I washed them. Now they are half the original size.
Because of the aforementioned defects, I would like to return them. I'm open to any solution be it exchanging them for a new pair or getting a refund. Do you have any suggestions? (it is not clear what you're referring to, suggestion regarding what?)
Kind regards
I hope it helps. Good job!
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New trousers
Dear Madam,I received my trousers which I have recently bought at your shop. Unfortunately, I'm not very satisfied with the quality and hereafter I'm going to I will explain why.
First of all, the trousers are not in good condition: the colour is faded, the buttons fell off and they shrank a lot when I washed them. Now they are twice smaller in half the size.
Because of those mentioned defects I mentioned, I would like to return them and I'm open to any solution; whether it comes about them being changed for the a new pair or a refund. Do you have any other suggestions?
Kind regards
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Dear Madam, I received my trousers, which I recently bought from your shop. Unfortunately, I'm not very satisfied with the quality and hereafter I'm going to explain why. First of all, the trousers are not in good condition: the colour is faded, the buttons fell off and they shrank a lot when I washed them. Now they are half the size. As such, I would like to return them and I'm open to any solution; whether I can exchange this pair for a new one or be refunded. Do you have any other suggestions? Kind regards
Also note that we should always avoid starting sentences with 'But' and 'Because'.
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