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Email for internship
Hi, I'd like to apply for an internship in Ireland, I've written this short email...can someone please correct it? Thank you so much :)Dear X,
I'm Carola, an Italian student in the second year of my Master Degree, studying “Italian Language and Culture for Foreign People” at X University. I'm writing to you because I want to apply for the Erasmus + Traineeship programme and I would really like to arrange my internship in your school X.
The internship can last from two to three months, it must take place between the 1st September 2019 and the 30th June 2020 and it doesn't require any financial cost for the Host Organization because I'll be offered a scholarship which is entirely financed by the European Union and the insurance coverage depends only on my University. Regarding the period for the internship, I have to be in Italy in March 2020 because it's when I'm graduating, so it would be better if it's before that month. As an alternative, I can also do the internship after my graduation, from April to June 2020. Let me know which months suit you better.
I would really like to perform my internship in your institute because I feel the need to practice the scientific knowledge acquired during my University years within the world of work and I think that it is important to make use of the possibility to do so abroad in particular because my professional ambition is to become an Italian teacher in an English-speaking country or in a French-speaking one.
You can find my CV and a text about Erasmus + Traineeship attached. I remain at your disposal for an interview via phone or Skype.
Thank you for the attention,
Sincerely,
Carola
Email for internship
Hi, I'd like to apply for an internship in Ireland, I've written this short email...can someone please correct it? Thank you so much :)Dear X,
My name is Carola and I am an Italian student in the second year of my Master Degree “Italian language and culture for foreigner people” at X University. I am (generally avoid contractions in more formal writing) writing you because I would like to apply for the Erasmus + Traineeship program and would honored if I could arrange for an internship at SCHOOL-X.
I am available for a one to three month internship between the 1st of September 2019 and the 30th of June 2020. I will not require compensation for this opportunity, I have been offered a scholarship which is entirely financed by the European Union and my insurance coverage depends only on my University. Regarding the period for the internship, I have to be in Italy in March 2020 for my graduation, so it would be ideal if it concluded before then. As an alternative, I can also do the internship after my graduation, from April to June 2020. Let me know which option suits you better.
I would really like to perform my internship in your institution because I feel the need to practice the scientific knowledge I have acquired during my University years within the world of work. I think that it is important to make use of my knowledge abroad because my professional ambition is to become an Italian teacher in an English-speaking country or in a French-speaking one.
You can find my CV and a text about Erasmus + Traineeship attached. I remain at your disposal for an interview via phone or Skype.
Thank you for the attention,
Sincerely,
Carola
In general this is very good. I changed some word choices a bit to make it feel more formal. Do keep in my, my word choice and sense of formality are American and not Irish so if you get a response from someone a few thousand miles east of me I would go with their answers.
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