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check my topic in english please Today some people think that educated person plays more important role in global market than person with rich experience. In contemporary world there are a lot of people who have high education diploma from top universities. Most of them have a job with average salary and higher. However there are a lot of examples when educated people can't find a job according their specialization and work in another work places with low salary and sometimes as a illegal workers. From the other hand there are a lot of cases when people without diploma become a successful professionals and leaders of huge companies. Some of them became a billionaires and have built incredible carrier. But if compere this two categories of people, the number of educated people is bigger than talanted people. So, I agree with thought that people with diploma plays significant role in global market than people with experience and their contribution to world development is more valuable.

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1. Today some people think that an educated person plays a more important role in the global market than a person with rich experience.

2. In the contemporary world there are a lot of people who have a high education diploma from the top universities.

3. Most of them have a job with an average salary and higher.

4. However there are a lot of examples when where educated people can't find a job according to their specialization and work in another other work places with lower salaries and sometimes as a illegal workers.

5. From On the other hand there are a lot of cases when people without a diploma become a successful professionals and leaders of huge companies.

6. Some of them became a billionaires and have built an incredible carrier.

7. But if we were to compere compare this these two categories of people, the number of educated people is bigger than talanted talented people.

8. So, I agree with the thought that people with diplomas plays a significant role in the global market than compared to people with experience and their contribution to world development is more valuable.

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