Please help me to correct my essay! Thank you so much A multitude of local shore has recently closed because of the rise of shopping centres or malls which changes the shopping habit. This essay has seen this development as a positive one because it helps the cities attracting more tourists and it is safer for shoppers. On the one hand, the development of large shopping centres or malls can make the cities look better in foreigners’ eyes. That is to say that all the stores are organized in one place where they have to follow a general rule of the building to operate can keep the cities away from unattractive signs to foreigners such as beggars or an unorganized waste system. For example, Ho Chi Minh City has seen a huge increase in the number of tourists since they invested in its attempt of gathering all local stores into one building ten years ago. On the other hand, having a chance to do all shopping, entertaining and leisure activities in one big place is safer for shopping goers. Because it can save them from unexpected accidents usually happening by commuting from one place to others. For instance, according to a recent Vietnamese government report, there is 10% decrease in the number of accidents happened on the streets after this country succeeded in building at least three large shopping centres in every key cities. In conclusion, the fact that a large amount of customers changes their habit of shopping locally is a positive development because it improves the appearance of the cities which is an appeal to tourists and it can increase the safeness of shopping activities.