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A day I like a day in which everything can make me feel satisfied, so l try my best to do everything well. That is why l am busy. It may be hard to understand, but it is true. l just let myself become better, and l can have a good future, but sometimes, some things can't go my way.

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A day

I like a day that in which everything can make me feel satisfied, so I try my best to do some things,and attempt to do it everything well. That is why I am busy. It appears to may be hard to understand, but it is true. l just let myself become better, and I can have a good future, but sometimes, some things can't do in go my own way.

写得还好,Tracy。注意英文的标点符号和空格规则。还有:写的时候,"thing"这个词能不用最好不用。在英文里,"thing“写下来很难听。

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