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My house's wall burned!xD Wall On Fire!
Today a very funny accident happened!
Guess what1...:) hehe
Recently my room leaked whenever it rains so I had people from repairing shop came come to repair the roof.our house. And 2while they are it was being repaired repairing the roof in my room, my mom and sister was were in their quietly studying together. peacefully. Then suddenly a The repairman (Who was reparing) suddenly opened the the door and shouted something like this, "Water please!!!!!!!!!!". Of course my mom and my sister were surprised to hear that and asked for the reasonhim why. And again Again he shouted something to the effect like this, "The wall is burning!!!!!xO". So everyone in my house formed a bucket brigade and the fire was soon extinguished. gone out soon. The man explained that he was using a burner and accidentally the wall caught on fire mistakenly.
I was going for a out shopping at the time. Nothing was unsual when I came home and no one told me of the accident until I smelt something like coffee beans in my room. when this accident was going on, so when i came back home it seemed everything was as usual and no one told me what had happened during my absence. And when I entered my room, it was smelled like yhe aroma of coffee beans. So I asked my family why. I was astonished when my family later told me of the incident to hear the story!xD
Anyways, I thank God for that my house was remain in safety is still standing! xD
I thought this accident incident was very funny, but maybe a bit scary. it's a little bit indecent...:P haha
Good night everyone!:D
Sumika
P.S The man asked my mom for a Band-Aid after the accident.
1. No need to write such a question unless you changed your title so something else like "Guess What?". We already sort of knew from your original title. That's why you need a catchy title.
2. Don't being a sentence with "and" or "or". These conjunctions are use to connect sentences in the middle. If you must start a sentence with one, use "However", "although", "since" "ever since" etc.
My house's wall was burnt!xD
Today, a very funny accident happened!
Guess what...:) hehe
Recently, my room leaks had been leaking when it rains, so people from repairing the repair shop came to our house. And while they are were reparing the roof in my room, my mom and sister was were studying together peacefully. Then suddenly, a man (who was reparing) opened the door and shouted like this, "Water please!!!!!!!!!!". Of course, my mom and my sister were surprised to hear that and asked him why. And again, he shouted like this, "The wall is burning!!!!!xO". So everyone in my house formed a bucket brigade and the fire gone went out soon after. The man explained that he was using a burner, and the wall accidentally caught fire mistakenly.
I was going for a shop shopping when this accident was going on, so when I came back home, it seemed everything was as usual and no one told me what had happened during my absence. And when I entered my room, it was smelled like yhe aroma of coffee beans. So I asked my family why. I was astonished to hear the story!xD
Anyways, thank God for my house was remain in safety safe! xD
I thought this accident was very funny, but maybe it's a little bit indecent...:P hah
Good night everyone!:D
Sumika
P.S The man asked my mom for a Band-Aid after the accident.
My house's wall was burned!xD
Today, a very funny accident happened!
Guess what...:) hehe
Recently, my room leaks when it rains, so people from the repairing shop came to our house. And while they were repairing the roof of my room, my mom and sister was studying together peacefully. Then suddenly a man (who was reparing) opened the door and shouted like this, "Water please!!!!!!!!!!". Of course mom and my sister were surprised to hear that and asked him why. And again he shouted like this, "The wall is burning!!!!!xO". So everyone in my house formed a bucket bridge and the fire gone out soon. The man explained that he was using a burner making the wall catch fire mistakenly.
I was going for shopping when this accident was happening, so when i came back home, it seemed everything was as usual and no one told me what had happened during my absence. And when I entered my room, it was smelled like the aroma of coffee beans, so I asked my family why. I was astonished when I heard the story!xD
Anyways, thank God for my house was remain in safety! xD
I thought this accident very funny, but maybe it's a little bit indecent...:P hah
Good night everyone!:D
Sumika
P.S The man asked my mom for a Band-Aid after the accident.
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WOW! Is your wall made of wood or only the wallpaper was burnt?
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