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Brazilian Carnival 2nd day writing: This week, here in Brazil, we were celebrating our biggest culture festival, the carnival. In Rio, there was a lot of music trucks in the streets and happy people following those trucks. Everybody wearing costumes. What do you know about brazilian carnival?

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Brazilian Carnival

Second 2nd day of writing [1]: This week, here in Brazil, we were celebrating our biggest culture festival [2], the carnival. In Rio, there were was a lot of music trucks [3] in the streets and happy people following those trucks. Everybody was wearing costumes [4]. What do you know about brazilian Brazilian carnival?


[1] There is nothing technically wrong here, but my corrections just make the sentence more mature

[2] You could say "cultural festival", or "festival of culture"

[3] As you are talking about trucks, which is plural, you need to say "were'

[4] As you are talking about something that happened in the past, you need to use the verb "was"


Great job, keep writing! :-) I hope this helps a bit. All I know about Brazilian carnival is that I want to be in Brazil and experience it myself!!!

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Brazilian Carnival

2nd day writing: This week, here in Brazil, we were celebrating our biggest cultural festival, the carnival. In Rio, there was a lot of music trucks in the streets and happy people following those trucks. Everybody was wearing costumes. What do you know about Brazilian carnival?


Hi Debora! Nice job! I know that the Carnival in Brazil is a huge celebration!  I know there are a lot of colorful costumes and music, but that's about it! 

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