What you think about plastic surgery to be beautiful?
First of all, I want you to see the first picture of a Korean woman. Is she ugly? Then I want you to see the second picture. Is she beautiful?
She had had an inferiority complex about her face, so she got plastic surgery many times to become beautiful. The second picture shows the result. People have their own faces by nature, but some people seem to dislike their face and even attribute their unhappiness to their faces. They think if they were more beautiful, they would be happier. But people like that tend not to be satisfied with their faces, how many times they get plastic surgery. What do you think about plastic surgery to be beautiful? Do you want to do it?
The second picture.
https://img.cdn.nimg.jp/s/niconews/articles/images/4383786/e9f23b9a5982ba67ced79c6d0e2c7dcb2dc43cff7207fd2d25ae0fca51bf17aa56ce9fc755f2fd1f7bdf54d67f3613a3a393dfa298860611c3dd3cd9f654ddb1/640x480s_FFFFFF?key=759eeba2d5d4ac2f7c197ada607f96e69edb72a45f129a62fc280469f8a76249
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What you think about plastic surgery to be beautiful?
First of all, I want you to see the first picture of a Korean woman. Is she ugly? Then I want you to see the second picture. Is she beautiful?She had had an inferiority complex about her face, so she got plastic surgery many times to become beautiful. The second picture shows the result. People have their own faces by nature, but some people seem to dislike their face and even attribute their unhappiness to their faces. They think if they were more beautiful, they would be happier. But people like that tend not to not be satisfied with their faces, no matter how many times they get plastic surgery. What do you think about plastic surgery to be beautiful? Do Would you want to do it?
The second picture.
https://img.cdn.nimg.jp/s/niconews/articles/images/4383786/e9f23b9a5982ba67ced79c6d0e2c7dcb2dc43cff7207fd2d25ae0fca51bf17aa56ce9fc755f2fd1f7bdf54d67f3613a3a393dfa298860611c3dd3cd9f654ddb1/640x480s_FFFFFF?key=759eeba2d5d4ac2f7c197ada607f96e69edb72a45f129a62fc280469f8a76249
Your english is top notch! very minor corrections. the last one is not incorrect per se but it just sounds better with would instead of do, because it is a hypothetical scenario.
Good Luck!
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First of all, I want you to see the first picture of a Korean woman. Is she ugly? Then I want you to see the second picture. Is she beautiful? She had had an inferiority complex about her face, so she got plastic surgery many times to become beautiful. The second picture shows the result. People have their own faces by nature, but some seem to dislike their face and even attribute their unhappiness to their looks. They think if they were more beautiful, they would be happier. But people like that tend not to be satisfied with their faces, no matter how many times they get plastic surgery. What do you think? Do we need plastic surgery to be beautiful? Would you do it? The second picture. https://img.cdn.nimg.jp/s/niconews/articles/images/4383786/e9f23b9a5982ba67ced79c6d0e2c7dcb2dc43cff7207fd2d25ae0fca51bf17aa56ce9fc755f2fd1f7bdf54d67f3613a3a393dfa298860611c3dd3cd9f654ddb1/640x480s_FFFFFF?key=759eeba2d5d4ac2f7c197ada607f96e69edb72a45f129a62fc280469f8a76249
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Hello, Cilla. Thank you for sharing your opinion. Yes, the pictures are the same woman. I agree with "People should try to learn not to judge people on their physical appearance."
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Is it the same woman on the second picture? What happened to her face? I saw a documentary about plastic surgery in South Korea. It seems quite common to get some plastic surgery there, even at a young age. I am not against plastic surgery on the condition that it helps the person feeling better and not to answer to "social standards". Moreover, beauty is subjective. What is considered as "beautiful" in a country can differ from another one. People should try to learn how to love themselves the way they are and people should try to learn not to judge people on their physical appearance.
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