The Significant Man in My Life
I have got a lot of significant people in my life.
But now the closest one is my husband.
He’s always ready to help. He 's completely supports our family financially.
He's always ready to listen my impressions and explains me what is happening in the world.
When i don't agree with him he comes to make peace the 1st.
When I'm depressed he can find magical words to revive my soul.
And he has a words that shows up my faults.
He loves our children very much. He plays with them and goes for a walk.
But I wish he could laugh more.
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The Significant Man in My Life
I have got a lot of significant people in my life.But now the closest one is my husband.
He’s always ready to help. He 's completely supports our family financially.
He's always ready to listen to my impressions ideas/thoughts?and explains to me what is happening in the world.
When i I don't agree with him he always comes to make peace with me first the 1st.
When I'm depressed he can find magical words to revive my soul.
And he has a words that shows up my faults.
He loves our children very much. He plays with them and goes for a walks with them.
But I wish he could laugh more.
This is lovely well done x Look at the line in red - what you have written is about love and kidness and that sentence in red isnt a loving and kind sentence as it is saying that your husband uses words to show up your faults.
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The Significant Man in My Life
I have got a lot of significant people in my life, but now the closest one is my husband.He’s always ready to help. He 's completely supports our family financially.
He's always ready to listen to my impressions ideas/feelings/stories and explains to me what is happening in the world.
When I don't agree with him, he comes to make peace the 1st first.
When I'm depressed, he can finds magical words to revive my soul. He has a words that shows cover up my faults. or He has words that reveal my faults. (I'm not sure what you meant with this sentence.)
He loves our children very much. He plays with them and goes for walks, but I wish he could laugh more. (don't start a sentence with but)
I hope the corrections help!
Regards
Maryna
https://www.italki.com/maryna
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