First notebook entry: Introducing myself

When Time has passed by and I have grown up to be an adult . In these passed 1twenty two years that had gone by, I have learned learnt a large amount of knowledge to charge change myself but I find that my English is too poor to be involved with international trading . I hope to practise English with those who have having the same wish.

1.  Another way of writing is, "During this past 22 years..." I am just showing you a different styles of writing.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

When time has passed by , I have grown up to an adult . In the passed twenty two years , I have learned a large amount of knowledge to charge myself . But I find that my English is too poor to international trading . I hope to practise English with those who have the same wish .

Pay attention to the sentence pattern "too ... to....", it means some conditions over than your control and you can't bear it.

For example:

The apple is too big to be eaten up only by myself.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

As the time has passed by, I have become an adult. In the passed twenty-two years, I have gained a lot of knowledge to prepare myself, but I find that my English is too poor for international trading. I hope to practice English with those who have the same wish.