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BARCELONA If someone comes to Spain, is essential what visit Barcelona on the Mediterranean coast, on the east of the country. There its can to see " el parque Güell, or the Cathedral of the Sacred Family. It most also to visit the quarter of" La Rambla" where to see the stalls and to enter to the old market " La Boqueria". Its can to visit the museum of Picasso, bullring designed for Dali which nowadays is transformed in a shopping center - by to be forbidden the bulls- By last, you can finished the visit going up until the mountain Montjuic, where views of tbe city are nices This is my recommendstion, but there are mañy sites still. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!

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Hi, Dann:

Thank you so much for sharing about one of the major cities in Spain. I've always wanted to visit Barcelona on the Mediterranean coast and your short introduction just made me leave this on my bucket list for next year. :)

In general, your points were really clear and sent the message across. I crossed out quite a few prepositions. Were you talking about two places on the green highlight sentence? It sounded like two different places to me, so I added "and" in there. 


BARCELONA

If someone comes to Spain, is It's essential to know where to visit Barcelona, that is on the Mediterranean coast, on the east of the country. There its.  You can see " el parque Güell, or the Cathedral of the Sacred Family there.
Another must-visit is the quarter of" La Rambla" where you can see the stalls and to enter to the old market " La Boqueria".
Its You can also to visit the museum of Picasso and bullring designed for Dali which nowadays is transformed in a shopping center - by to be forbidden the bulls-  
By Lastly, you can finished the visit by going up until the mountain Montjuic, where the views of the city are nices
This is These are my recommendations, but there are still many sites (to explore/ visit).
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!

Should you need more help in practicing English or talk about different attraction in Canada or other parts of the world, please contact me.

Best Wishes,

Sarah 



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