What I Am Trying to Say was... !

I happened to meet a Vietnamese woman who loves fine art at a local cafe. She said her favorite artist is Vincent van Gogh. I was so happy because I, myself, am also deeply interested in his artwork. Therefore, I was going to tell her about the van Gogh exhibition in Seoul, but with my limited ability in English, I could not explain it well.

Ugh! None of the English words that I had so diligently studied, and which were inside my head, wanted to come out. They were just stick there, floating around lifelessly! What I had wanted to tell her was:

1. There is a Vincent van Gogh exhibition held presently in Seoul.

2. They are showing van Gogh's artwork by projection display on the ceiling and on the walls.

3. By projection, I mean that the artwork constantly changes.

4. Given that van Gogh is your favorite artist, I would highly recommend that you go to see this amazing exhibition.

Hi, Sarah. Good job! The changes that I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, and for ease of readings. I hope that this helps you. J. 

1. Van gogh exhibition was held in seoul

There is a Vincent Van Gogh exhibtion to be held here in Seoul.

3. They show Van gogh's art works by lighting on the ceiling and wall

They show Van Gogh's artwork by lighting the ceiling and wall.

4. The lightings,I mean, gogh's artworks change constantly

The lighting shows how Van Gogh's artwork is constantly changing.

6. That's why I recommend you to go to see the amazing exbition.

That is why I'm recommending we should go see it. The exhibtion is amazing.

Feel free to correct my sentences🧚🏻‍♀️

Thanks a lot