Spring
After long cold winter has gone, I always feel a breath of spring in the mountains. There are some new surprising that it is reborned every year. Have you ever felt breath of the mountains? It sometimes looks as if it is burning. I love spring because I feel like new life starts again from there. Little tiny bud with pastel colors, Little birds practicing their song on the branch. It is really poor at the beginning, but the songs would be getting well and stronger day by day. It makes me smile. Soon, spring will come here. I am looking forward to feeling the days.
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Spring
After a long, cold winter has gone passed, I always feel a breath of spring in the mountains. There are some new surprising surprises that it is reborned come every year. Have you ever felt seen the breath of the mountains? It sometimes looks appears as if it is burning. I love spring because I feel like new life starts again from there. I can see little tiny buds with pastel colors and hear little birds practicing their songs on the branches. It is They are really poor at the beginning, but the their songs would be getting well get better and stronger day by day. It makes me smile. Soon, spring will come be here. I am looking forward to feeling the those days.Wow, this was very lovely. I really enjoyed reading it.
とてもすてきでしたよ。書いてありがとう。私もその気持ちが欲しいいですね。
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Spring
After long cold winter has gone, I always feel a breath of spring in the mountains. There are some new surprising that it is reborn every year. Have you ever felt the breath of the mountains? It sometimes looks as if it's burning. I love spring because I feel like a new life starts again from there. Tiny little buds with pastel colors, Little birds practicing their songs on the branches . It is really poor at the beginning, but the songs would be getting well and stronger day by day. It makes me smile. Soon, spring will come here. I am looking forward to these days.
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You wrote well! がんばれ!
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Spring
After a long, cold winter has passed, I always feel a breath of spring in the mountains.
There are new surprises that come every year. Have you ever seen the breath of the mountains? It sometimes appears as if it is burning.
I love spring because I feel like new life starts again. I can see little tiny buds with pastel colors and hear little birds practicing their songs on the branches. They are really poor at the beginning, but their songs get better and stronger day by day. It makes me smile.
Soon, spring will be here. I am looking forward to those days.
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