Five bussiness sentences
Hello everyone, I wrote these sentences below just to practice a few new words that I learned.
Please let me know If I'm using them correctly! Thank you.
1 - They weren't made aware of their flight was delayed;
2 - He boasted about being a well-connected businessman;
3 - While the case was dragging on court, he probed for evidences for the second time;
3 - I don't know whether he'll win the case;
4 - I was told he won the match on the back of bribing the judges;
5 - The scheme is likely to end if his aide rise to power.
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Five bussiness sentences
Hello everyone, I wrote these sentences below just to practice a few new words that I learned.Please let me know If I'm using them correctly! Thank you.
1 - They weren't made aware that their flight was delayed;
To use 'of,' it would need to be: "They weren't made aware of the delay."
2 - He boasted about being a well-connected businessman;
3 - While the case was dragging on in court, he probed for evidence for the second time;
'evedence' is uncountable, like popcorn or milk or stuff. Plural is 'pieces of evidence,' or simply 'all the evidence.'
3 - I don't know whether he'll win the case;
4 - I was told he won the match on the back of bribing the judges;
The expression 'on the back of' doesn't make sense here. You could say "I was wold he won the math by bribing the judges."
5 - The scheme is likely to end if his aide rises to power.
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Thank you Ernest!
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I agree with all of the corrections that Taylor made and do not have anything to add. Great job!
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